作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Mobile phone has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some problems as well. How to resolve your old phone is a difficult problem for average persons. Author gave ten perfect choices to us. We can use our old phones as a chock, a car music player, a remote control and so on. You can use your old phone as a music player on the car.Some cars come equipped with docking ports for iPhones,you just let your iPhone connected with the stereo on your car by blueteeth,then the car will ring out music.We can also use these fonctions on the phone,just let it connected with the Internet,and it will become a Network monitor. Veicle tracker is also a great idea. Those cases just give us a guide thought.We can reuse our old electronic products as a helper.Because there is an old saying says"waster is a misplayed resource".