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With the development of technology, an increasing expanding number of people begin to refuse the social interaction. A young people who hate the out word and want to live away from the physical world .His determination touched god and luckily get an independent island. After a part of the time , he changes from a gentleman into a slutty man ,everything around him become bad and clutters. Even he is suspected that whether he exists in the material word. So he was scared in this small island. He prayed around the clock, eventually come back to this crowed world and enjoy in it.
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