高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown In the past, my hometown is very beatiful. There are many trees arund it. The river is very clean where many fish play free. the houses are poor and street is narrow. the life of people are not rich. nowadays, there are lots of landmarks in my hometown. you can see many cars in the street. but, during the development of the industry the envirment are broken. The tree are decresed and the fish are despearing every year. It is important to take measure to protect enveirment for government.