考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

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The brain and the computer Computer,a splending invention in the early 20 century,has a pavassive usage in the daily life of our human being.Consequentely,it is a substance of our brain to solve the problem in some ways,such as calculating,storing the information.Yet,the mind originating from mankind is different from the production of the industrial revolution. There are clear-cut distinction,obviously,can be drawn between the brain and the computer.First of all,while the machnical technology is combined with the chilly CPU,the thought with emotion and feeling deprives from our body that can creat miracle,such as brain strom,invention including the computer,and so on.Furthermore,by dealing with the problem just according to the code the programmer encoded,basic errors may appear if the cycle of the information is incorrect,like the domino start to falling.However,we human being settle the problem occuring to us basing on the concrete situation.Flexibly and efficiently,the complex had been solved.Last but not the least. All the diversities presented above extend the information of how the qomputer and the brain perform their function.As a great invention,it will be produce a marvalous effection once we treat the computer in an appriate way.Not only we concentrate on the technology,but focuse on ourself brain as well.Combing with them to make our daily life much more convinent.