考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

文章词汇表达丰富，不过拼写检查还需加强；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

The brain and the computer Computer,a splended invention in early 20 century,has a pervasive usage in the daily life of our human being.Consequentely,it is a substitude of our brain to solve the problem in some ways,such as calculating,storing the information.Yet,the mind originating from mankind is different from the production of the industrial revolution. Clear-cut distinctions,obviously,can be drawn between the brain and the computer.First of all,while the machanical technology is combined with the chilly CPU,the thought with emotion and feeling deprives from our body that can create miracle,such as brain storm,invention including the computer,and so on.Furthermore,by dealing with the problem just according to the code the programmer encoded,basic errors may appear if the loop is incorrect,like the domino start to falling.However,we human beings settle the problem occurring to us basing on the concrete situation.Flexibly and efficiently,the complex had been solved.Last but not least. All the diversities presented above extend the information of how the qomputer and the brain perform their function.As a great invention,it will be produce a marvalous effection once we treat the computer in an appriate way.Not only we concentrate on the technology,but focus on ourselves brain as well.Combing with them to make our daily life much more convenient.