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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9054
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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People always said,"You have a long way to go."When you go to this way,you can meet many mistakes.Some people think mistakes make them lose face.Others convert errors into the power.Because correcting the error is a good way to progress fast. Firstly,errors can make people alert.If a person always smooth, then he will be very slow progress.Mistakes can make people march in the hone.In the process of correct mistakes can constantly improve myself.Secondly,errors are keys.It can help people receive success.To correct the wrong process is the process of continuous success.Lastly,The ancients often say that man to err, to err is human. We do not fear mistakes, should face up to, and actively to correct. No one will not go wrong. As long as there is a positive heart, any difficulty can be solved

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