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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9066
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,学术词汇的希望能更熟练一��。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the internet on learning has two sides,on the one hand, we can get a variety of resources through the internet, on the other hand, learing in the internet brings in little connection with each other. In the modern society ,computers have been a part of our life,we can see computers everywhere. However, does learning on the internet replace everthing ?the answer absolutely is"no". Internet learning is just a way to gain knowledge,but it is not a only way.Not a little people use computer playing games ,chatting with each other,and so on.Very little people will study in the internet.So, not only use we computer get information.but also we can entertain a plenty of thing. To some extent, computer widen my view , the whole world is a global village ,we can know everything abou our earth,don't we?

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