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Joyfully, the American girl is dressing in traditional Chinese costume, when she traveled in China. Actually, this picture is a very typical case in the trend of culture interaction. Nowadays, people from every corner of the world are exchanging and sharing our civilization in different ways. Today, the world is well netted by transportation and information. Consequently, it is advisable to keep abreast with the tide. Individually, a humble attitude should be maintained facing any foreign issue. And we should try to comprehend and respect their customs and values. Moreover, our horizon should be extended to the outside world, and then we will be amazed by the splendid fruits of human civilization. As to society, a inclusive attitude is crucial. A case in point is the Shanghai Expo., in which we set a good model to let different cultures be acknowledged by the world. At last, mutual respect and understanding have been conveyed by the event. As a youngster in a much-active region of this trend, we should keep pace with it. The critical and initial step may be gain a mastery of English. Thus, we can communicate with the world with little obstacle. Secondly, we should be aware of the recourse come in handy from internet, such as open courses and American dramas. In these ways, we can get a glimpse of their civilization. With so many diverse material, let’s embark on the task right now.