字数:200满分:100分
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
there are two man in the carton,one is cutting the hair to like bekehanmu,with something covers his eyes. So do the customer .what odd is that both of have a sweet smile on their faces. We can find they follow the fashion without thinking. This is a common phenomen in our daily life. We choose something the one sweeping into the world,even it is not suit us. As a human with thought,we should deny follow others with a blind eye. When your friends call you to buy something not really useful,you should deny her. You should know human being is diffraction from animals,we have thought. You should decide what is good to you,not follow anyone else.