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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9079
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays more and more people are learning information from Internet,they learn good or bad everyday from all over the world .Of course i learn something from internet.But can we say internet on learing means education?NO,we can't.Then i'll give my opinion about this. To be honest we learn a lot of information from internet every day,some people even day and night,but we can treat this as education.Education needs good enviroment,but internet has no good enviroment and it spreads more worse thing to people ,even little children.That's why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information.

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