2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章层次较为清晰；能够使用一些不错的从句；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

It's known to us that where there is a way,there is a will.We should realize that if we don't have strong will,we would not do anting.Therefore,we should keep strong will in our mind and never easy give up our dream. As a old saying goes"It is necessary to succeed for keep strong will ",we can find mang famous people like Tomas Edison,he conducted 1,600 tests to find the right materials filamate.Without strong will,perhaps he could't invented the electronic light bumb.What's more,only keep strong will can you to be famous man!Just like our study,if you don't hard study,you will lost much oppotunities and you will be a indiffirent man in your future. As far as I am concernd,I think strong will is a important characters people should to cultivate and never give up it untill you succeed.