高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I used to live in a beautiful small town with green trees all around it. River are so clear that I can see the fish swim in happy with groups. Without wide street there were no cars on the street. People's life were poor and they house were low and have no menoy to build nice house. With the development of industry, more and more tall building are set up such as factory, department, shopping mall, bank and so on. People's growing better and better. Cars and buses drive on the street . But the envirment is getting bad. Trees are cut and fish havd gone. It is a serious problem to soluate the pollution as soon as possible.