托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

It is known to everyone that a rational judgement should take as many influential factors into consider, especially in modern time that many things have changed a lot, and can be change in a second, so I am totally in the statement that a hasty judgments can hardly be believable. The most important reason for me to support the statement is that a snap judgment can hardly be comprehension enough. People are supposed to think as many aspects as possible when they making a judgment. There is an old sign in China says that we can never know a person without staying with him or her for a long time. It is easily for us to make a one-aspect judgment if we do not observe and consider an issue with a critical thinking. My mom used to oppose me to be a fan of Jay Chou, who is one of the most famous singers in China, and she thought it is a waste of time for me to listen to his music.However, she has changed her mind since I show her Jay's song, because he writes the songs with Chinese poems and I can improve my Chinese a lot when I listen to his music. Moreover, Jay's hard-working spirit has moved me so that I have started to study harder since I became his fan. Considering these factors, my mom ultimately have no question with my fondness to Jay Chou. Moreover, a snap judgement is more and more unbelievable in the changing modern time. In the ancient time, people might trust a hasty judgment because of the relatively steady society.For example, a young lady could judge a person with dirty dress is a man she would never marry, however, she can hardly say so nowadays, because the poor can become the rich in one night at modern society which has a obscure boundary between different classes. Last but not least,the internet has made things more and more complex now.For instance, we can never tell the real personality of a person according to the informations he or she posts in the Facebook. It is highly possible that the person pretends to be a traveller rather than a real one. What's more,there are so many technologies for people to make freak information that we have to think deeply before making a judgment. As mentioned above, I agree with the statement that a snap judgment can never be trusted, since people have to think differently and deeply in the changing modern society, and the internet has made things so complex now.