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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12936
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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With the development of science and change way of people's communication mode.The communication between people that has been transform face to face into through the keyboard and screen. Now the reason is ture is because we live in a informational society.The Internet on the people communication make the emotion between friends and relatives can be express easily.On the other hand ,it is regard as a very useful way to communication that can shorten the distance between the people .At the meantime ,the phenomenon of the lack of communication between people has became a society problem.and the Internet waste a lot of time that we should to be study and work. please don't say "can"t talk now , I'm chatting ." to those who care about you. Iike these words that could let the person was sad,sad.There are some opinions be followed about whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact .First ,we should pay more attention to the emotion of our life.The detail always contain all of loves.Second ,face to face can express our emotion directly to who you love .Third,we ought to try cut down the time using the Internet .It can make you have amount of free time and do more exercise to keep your health. In a word , the way I see it ,electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact and the Internet is just a way to express consist communication mode.

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