2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Dear friend . welcome.to my hometown. my homtown is very beautiful place .and ,in my homtown have some famous historical building .it is .warth.and clean .the place name is changchun. is one of have many of star in there produce.in changchun have snake ,of course have snackbar and be called snack street.therefore there people very like eat it .