2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm glad to you to visit my hometown, Welcome .My hometown is a beautiful city , there are some famous and interesting place such as Hengshan mountain Luohu park and so on. while I will introduce one by one for you,I hope you will be satisified . Firstly, I think the most interestingplace is Hengshang mountain.