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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章层次较为清晰。

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Turning point is a moving film heritage storyMany of the changes in the life of the moment, is often a kind of blessing. I like love and giving life. The film conveys the link between people, sharing, Thanksgiving, it is the turning point in life. The thought of our university life is an important turning point. University life is an important turning point. Some people think that the University is to learn knowledge and skills of the local culture, some people think that the University is to develop the capacities of my own, I also very much agree with the same. In universities, you can learn a lot in primary and secondary schools are not learning the knowledge. For example, people with interpersonal skills, self-learning ability and self-life, and values of culture and so on. All these will be in your future, with the help of a very important and very far-reaching implications. These aspects of culture, are essential in the university four years have tempered and thus develop. University life is a life of the most beautiful and struggling in the time. Everyone in the university have to learn a lot of knowledge and life skills, everybody is playing a youthful enthusiasm for the biggest, most hope that their efforts towards the goal and dream was to forward. Have a very good time University, the University has for some meaningful time, is commendable. So The turning point in the process of growing up is when you discover the core of strength within you that competitiveness all hurt.

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