高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累学术词汇；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；连词使用偏少。

I am football fantastic, playing football is my favorite sport. By chance i pack out a football then i played it with my friends. Since then i fell in love with it. Qften,I practice it with classmates and compete with them. 贝克汉姆 is my favorite football star which was born in England.I pursue a professional football player in the future.