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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3117
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写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

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The brain and the robot brain Computer,an outstanding invention in early 20 century,has vitality in the daily life of our human beings.With its excellent capability,it performs kinds of functions as a substitute to reduce the loan of our brain,such as calculating,storing the information.Nevertheless,the mind originating from mankind is unique so that the robot brain can never replace. Clear-cut distinctions,obviously,can be drawn between the brain and the computer.First of all,while the machanical technology is combined with the chilly CPU,the thought with emotion and feeling deprives from our body that can create miracles,such as a range of masterpieces in painting,all sorts of designs in clothing,various inventions including the computer,and so on.Furthermore,by dealing with the problem just in accordance with the code the programmer encoded,basic errors that are not supposed to be made may appear if the loop is incorrect,like the domino start to falling.On the contrary,man-kinds settle the problem that arising unexpectedly in an concrete way.Flexibly and efficiently,the complex had been solved.Last but not least. All the diversities presented above extend the information of how different the computer and the brain are.Centainly,as a great invention,we benefit marvelously from the production of the revolution not merely in the life-style but in the spiritual world owing of its easy approach of information. Combing with them to make our daily life much more convenient.

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