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i have a good friend that named XiaoHong.she is a lazzy girl who always likes sleeping .because we have the same hobby talking about others,so we develop a deep relationship.Although we are good friends ,we are not in the same school.she also very mean and never give me a call.sometimes i feel very angry,because i don't think she takes me as a friend.last year in a holiday,she appointed me that in the next day she will take me to sing songs and i felt very excited.but to my angry,on the next day she said that she had something to do and did not come.i felt very angry ,i think she was not integrity herself