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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36945
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;全文结构较为严谨;能够简单运用一些从句;请注意分段。

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i have a good friend that named XiaoHong.she is a lazzy girl who always likes sleeping .because we have the same hobby talking about others,so we develop a deep relationship.Although we are good friends ,we are not in the same school.she also very mean and never give me a call.sometimes i feel very angry,because i don't think she takes me as a friend.last year in a holiday,she appointed me that in the next day she will take me to sing songs and i felt very excited.but to my angry,on the next day she said that she had something to do and did not come.i felt very angry ,i think she was not integrity herself

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