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十一期间(National Holiday)，你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待，并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学，主要包括如下内容：
1．感谢同学的热情邀请；
2．对他及家人的热情款待表示感激；
3．表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象；
4．再次感谢他们一家人，并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式，而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出，内容并不复杂，可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。
Dear Xiaolu, I am writing to tell you how grateful i am to your invitati on to go to your home.。And thank you so much for you and your family entertaining.I am vary happy on it.There are many places of interest in your hometown,you took me visited it,i thank it is so beautiful,the air is fresher ,the environment is comfortable,i like your hometown very much, not only the scenery but you and your family, In my hometown,it also have many places of interest,i think some of you will very interested ,and i can guarantee if you come here, you will have a good time. once again thank you so much for your kind invitation . Best wishes to you yours
