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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9057
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;学术词汇使用熟练,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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The Impact of the Internet on learning The Internet has lots of influence on learning.Many people think that obtaining information is equal to education.However,as the picture warns us ,education involves more than simply learning to obtain information. In my opinion,education also includes thingking and practical skills rather than only to obtain the information and knowledge.On one hand,thingking is good for us to discover prombles.On the other hand ,practical skills contirbute to digest the knowledge we learn. As an old saying,"learning without thinking leads to confusion."Because of thinking and practising,many great people achieve their goal,such as Einstein ,Newton,Edison. In brief,the Internet provide valuable information for our learners,but they should be aware of the essence of education.What's more ,they should attach importance to develop their ability and cultivating their character instead of just obtaining the imformation.Thus ,only by stating innovation can educationbe fulfilled in practice.

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