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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Electronic communicate With the development of Internet,we use electronic communicate more than face-to-face contact.Many people think it is convenient to contact for families or friends. When we must work in the place where is so far away from home that we can't usually go home.In this time,we can use the Internet to communicate with them.What's important,the people separated with children can always see their children in the Internet. And when we have something urgent presses for solution,we can use the Internet to have a communicate.But with many people communicating in the Internet,someone is deceived easily.they trust the strangers without a hitch.That cause a lot of crime. I think electronic communicate is very good and convenient.But I think it's impossible that electronic communicate can replace face-to-face contact.Face-to-face can improve people's feeling,and it's more sincere.
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