2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,on line shopping become more and more popular.Many people shop on line more often than shop in the store.Of course,there are many advantages of on line shopping.For example,it is convenient for people to shop on line,it can not only save money but also save energy.On the contrary,there are also some problems on shopping on line.We don't know the quality of the goods on line and some people will be cheated.On my view,people should be careful when shopping on line in order to be cheated.At the same time,the goverment should take measures for on line shopping.