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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。
Nowadays, students try many ways to save money when buying something has become a common phenomenon. There's also a heat debate concerning whether saving money can make people smart consumers. In my opinion, economizing the money can benefit a lot. On the one side, for most of the students, their money comes from their parents and they themselves do not earn anything. With the increasing pressure over the society, it's more and more difficult for their parents to earn enough to afford their child, themselves and their aging parents.
