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Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
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you can make a change to yourself.As we all know,every year,a lot of students become worse and worse because of computer games. To be honest,I also play computer games.I play a game called'LOL'.In my view,it is a way to release stress.As the saying goes'One will lose ambition while being immersed in interests'And I know,it is a game so I only play it for 1 hour everyday.After that,I reliaze that it's time for me to study.On one hand, I sugest you that you need to study more often and not play too many computers games. On the other handI think your mother has duty,too.As an old saying goes'Everyone has his own freedom.'You can communicate with your mother in a good way.Then both of you can be satisfied with each other.
