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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40890
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
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熟练使用了一些长难句;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文章能较灵活使用词汇,学术词汇有些少,还需注意个别拼写错误。

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It's unwise to draw a conclusion just the moment when you hear or see something . There is a saying in China , the meaning of that is that please don't believe what you hear ,but to believe what you see by youself .Here ,I want to put up an other point that if we want to approach the realistic , we should not only combine the hearing and seeing ,but also to find the provety to support your sumption . Take the real story for example ,we all know about the news of Wen Yu that happen in Nanjing.One day ,on his way to company as usual, suddenly he find that there was a old women sleep on the floor with a terrible face , he thought she must be uncomfortable and go to see her . He asked the old women and shake her hands,then the old women open her eyes. But to Wen Yu 's surprise , the old women caught Wen Yu and yell with a loudly voice that "you return my money to me "

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