2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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if I got a chance to intrfoduce a city for you , there is no doubt that I will show you Guilin. there is a going says : Guilin's beautiful environment may count the first in the world.You may can not agree more if you come to this city. Guilin is famous for its mountains as well as the raver which calls Lijiang. Varieties shapes of mountains stand aside the long raver .some of them looks like animals such as elephent ,mokey ,some looks like a woman .But most of them are all interesting. when it comes to the river, we may atracted by the clear and cool water. when coming near to the river , you will surprise to find it easy to see the fishes swimming freely in the water clearly. Not only the beautiful environment but also the food there makes us enjoy ourselves so much to forget to go home. Guilin noodles are so delicious that you may never forget it.