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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7189
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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作者词汇基础扎实;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays the large cities especially megacities see the quality of life is decreasing seriously. Why is this trend existing?What kind of method can be used to solve this problems? The first answer in my opinion is the urban sprawl which goes apace and leads to a series of environmental pollution,such as forest destructions,turning the natural habitats into skyscrapers,tens of thousands of extinction of plants,animals and other diverse creatures and much more.To solve this problem,I think that changing the way to advance our economy is a very important point.We have to transmute those industries which produces harmful substances into clean one which is coordinated with the nature.In addition,maintaining the developing rates appropriatelly is another solution. On the other hand,the rapid incline of the amount of citizens is also a reason to the problem.As the population grow fast,our constructions of public utilities can not keep the pace with the former.In fact,this problem is based on the urban sprawl.

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