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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com Date:Oto.15th,2014 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:To establish business relationship. Dear Sir and Madam, I knew your company had a new produect called 5670 from Dec.15th to 22th in New York during the exhibition.I am really interested in this, so please set us a price list and instruction.Thank you for your coooperation,and I hope we can establish business relationship. Your sinserely, Hu Bin
