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Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
You can make changes to yourself.As we all know,every year,a lot of students become less impressive because of computer games. To be honest,I also play computer games.In my view,it is a way to release stress.As the saying goes'One will lose ambition while being immersed in interests'And I recognize,it is a game so I only play it for 1 hour everyday.After that,I realize that it's time for me to study.On the one hand, I suggest you study more often and not play too many computers games. On the other handI think your mother has duty,too.As an old saying goes'Everyone has his own freedom.'You can communicate with your mother in a good way.Then you can be satisfied with each other.
