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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；用词丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,Online shopping is more and more popular,and it represents fashion.It provides a simple and convenient way to shop for every one of us.Especially those people who are too lazy to go outside.And we can purchase everything we want. However,just as every coin has two sides,online shopping also has its positive and negative senses.To start with,we don't need to go outside and shuttle back and forth between a variety of malls anymore.And thus,we can save a great deal of time.And the best advantage is that there is a large variety of goods much more than every supermarket,we can choose the best of them.Even so ,there is a flip side.Some pictures of goods are not the same as the real goods,and it is very difficult to identify.Likewise,without comunicate face to face,it is not easy for us to judge weather the seller is a trustworthy person. As far as I am concernet,the advantages of online shopping outweight the disadvantages greatly.But we also can't ignore those problems in it,after all,it is crucial to our benefit.In shorthand,only with direct and effective arrangement about online shopping will we enjoy the advantages of it.
