小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friends,she's my classmate of college.she as old as me.she come from ChangDe City of Hunan.In the school,she live in the same room,so,she also my roomate too,She is very short and cute.with short hair.She always help me when I am in trouble.we are very close,she is my best friend and I love her.