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As is known to all,there are mang dishonest phenomenon in our sociaty now,which do great harm to our human beings.for example,if we tell lies to our boss that we heve finished the task which we must finis.It will do harm to our impression in a way. In order to make our life full with more loveness,I think we should be an honest person.As we all konw ,honest means there are no lies between people,if so ,all of us can do many things fluently.Besides ,if one be honert to others,he\she will get the good paid by others.Also honest means we don not have to pay much attention to whether others tell lies to us or not,so it is easy for us to share our opinions about all kinds of probiems which we meet in our life. Above all,we can konw that it is so important for us to be a honest person .If all of us act as a honest person ,our sociaty will full with harmony,there will be least fightings between our human beings.
