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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8997
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, more and more people dress well thenselves because it refects that respect others. But appearance is one of the person's character. In my opinion, we can't judge a person by thier appearance. Ther are some reasons are listed as followed about my idea. Firstly, it's conveniently ignored the talent people. Secondly, it's easy to cause the socail problem. Thirdly, it's bad for our economy growth. For example, one person has an ambition to devlepoment himself and is usefui for our socirety, but he is simple so that he couldn't ba amditted to some cooperations. Because of this, he would fell disappointed about himself and not have confident. Finally, he couldn't show his abilities. All in all, we can't judge a person by thier appearance. That's not a wise action.

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