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【题目要求】
Today food travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?【题目翻译】
今天食品运输需要的很长的距离，为什么?这种趋势是好还是不好?
【题目解析】
解题思路：原因分析 + 利弊讨论
食品：水果和粮食：
原因：有些地方没有生产的条件 + 例证
大的农场一般离城市较远
利好：长途运输客观上使得相关产业繁荣
消费者可以享受到应季的食品
弊端：运营成本的增加必然提高产品的价格，增加消费者的消费负担
运输时间长，食品可能出现腐烂的现象
运输过程中可以产生大量的空气污染和噪音污染
文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Transportation improvement have greatly promoted the development of the food industry, as a result food can now be transported from thousands of miles away, it brings more good than bad. On the one hand, the whole industry is booming and much employment are expected in areas involved like production, processing, transportation, retailing. On the other hand, ordinary people can afford and enjoy products from afar. This might have introduced some negative impacts such as promoting the consumption of fossil fuel during the transportation, more carbon emission and more air pollution. But compared with the benefits the change has brought to us, it's cost-effective and more green energy are needed to incorporated into the transportation process. The choices of different food from far used to be seen as a privilege or status, which only entitled by the rich and royal family. But now ordinary people can access these resources in the supermarkets, which marks the progress in equity. This fast delivery has released the farmer from the bound of narrow market, also the various need of consumers better quality food are greatly met. Thus the future of the whole industry is promising since it guarantees people's basic need. What's more, the most affected industry is transportation industry, for the improvement of speed not only ensured the quality of food, but also brought convenience to online consumers. As a result, transportation industry have been expanding, more and more people are involved in this industry. As for the negative side of this change, th fossil fuel burned by the vehicle are depleting and resulting in green house gas emission and air pollutants. All this may pose a threat to human to handle, however the answer lie with technology advancements in green energy. To concluded, long distance food transportation weigh more benefits than harm. But we need to note the danger it may exert on our environment, we encourage the application of green energy in this industry.
