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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；能够使用一些不错的从句；学术词汇偏少，且文中有部分拼写错误。
As we all konw,honest piays an important role in our society. But there are mang insincerities in our daily life.Scuh as some people pretend to have a fall in order to make others help him\her even let them pay back to him\her. Some people also tell lies that they have no relatives so that they cuold beg for others without doing anything. Since that dishonest does great harm to us,I think we should be honest. Honest looks like a bright light,which can take us to a bright future.If one acts as a honest person,it will easy for him\her to make some faithful friengs.Besides,if we don not tell lies to others,they will share happies with you in return.Thus both of us would live in a more happier and meaningful life.Last but no least,honest means we don not have to discuss others by guess,which makes our life become more and more harmony. Knowing that honest is so important,we would better be honest from now on.If so,our society will become more and more safety and there are lest mistakes between human beings.
