2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；能够使用一些简单的从句；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

People tend to show their abusolutatly conclusion at sight about the happening things. But in my opion, it unwise to come to conclusion immediately after seeing or hearing. It may lead to some bad consquences. There are some of them. First, without further observation, you could not make yourself understand the comprehensive situation of things.Even worse, sometimes you will miss an opportunity, a sincerely friend, a job because of your such hasty judgement. And then, the conclusion could not be your convincing opinion, because your brand hasn't think it over. It is a mislead to your beheave and decision. If you want to make a wise conclusion, not only should you use your eyes and ears to know what has happend, but also use your brain and heart to feel it：judge whether it good or bad, and your view.