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Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
From my point to this,you can make changes to yourself.As we all know,every year,a lot of students become less impressive because of computer games. To be honest,I also play computer games.Here are the reasons why I play this.First of all,in my view,it is a way to release stress.Apart from that,I can make my friendship better. However,As the saying goes'One will lose ambition while being immersed in interests'And I recognize,it is a game so I only play it for 1 hour every day.After that,I realize that it's time for me to study.On the one hand, I suggest you study more frequently and not play too many computers games. On the other hand,I think your mother has duty,too.As an old saying goes'Everyone has his own freedom.'You can communicate with your mother in a good way.Then you can be satisfied with each other.
