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小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7152
要求:
描述我的新老师。
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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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My new teacher My new teacher is Kelly Hu.She is my integrated English teacher. In my mind,she is very funny.Because she tells us many foreign stories in class. And many students like her. Kelly has a short black straight hair. She always talk to us with a smile. At my firsy day met her,I think she is a little fat.But nowaday,she looks good. Kelly allows us see the English film in the class,so that we all get alone well with each other. Last but not the least,we will enjoy our integrated English class,becaues we have a interested new teacher whose name is Kelly Hu.

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