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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13031
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;从句使用量稍显不足;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Dear president, As a senior in our university,I do appreciate the teachers provided the valuable attention in our study and campus life. In order to be more progress, I would like to come up with some suggestions which improve students' physical quality. Firstly, it is considerable to purchase more newly body-building equipment for weight training.Secondely, if the university could build more opening fields, the students would more than happy to playing sports. Lastly, some physical competitions should be encouraged,thus we will greatly get part of it. I will be more than happy to see improvements in these respects. Yours sincerely Li Ming

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