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how should parents help children to be indenpendent Nowadays,there is only one child in most family of China,so the girl seems to be little princess and the boy seems to be little emperor at home .Parents arrange all the thing for the child .child get used to relying on their parents.They don't understand how they face their by themselves . As the saying goes"give a man fish and you feed him for a day;teach a man to fish and you feed him for alifetime“.Parents should make child independent. There are some ways to help child to be independent.First,parents should let child to see the world and make them understan that pepple are different.Second ,parents should teach child make a clear distinction between right and wrong.Let the child have right judgements.Third,it is important to teach child how to learn inthe life .Learning is obbligato in life on the road .Last,parents should constantly encouragethem.Let have courage to chanllege difficuty. No parents can accompany their child for the whole life. Only being independent ,they can have the good live and pregant life.
