3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的学术词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Quietly and indifferently,an overwhelming number of people stuked by a net are occupied with the Internet,which universalized in 20 century.By contacting with each other on-line,indeed,they are next to them geologically.Thus,instead of talking to a live person in a real world,communicating in a virtual zone has become a fashion.The universalisation of the Internet does exert an effect to the life style of us. As the Internet has a vitality,a looming danger-prevent fellow cityzen from social intercourse-becomes more visible.On the one hand,it seems that people on the planet can be netted through the Internet,after all,what you need is that a computer and a click and then you are in with wide spread Internet access.Nevertheless,the more time you spend on-line,the less time you spend in real life,in which there are relationships with your parents,old friends,colleagues.Natually,it is preferable for us to watch Tv,log in MSN at home rather than to visit an old friend.On the other hand,interaction is a stimulating factor to develop a harmonious society.Without inreraction,people becomes indifferent.A great attention is being paid to the head-scratching unconcerned behavior such as campus violence,no courtesy in BRT,which obstruct social development.Last but not least. To sum it up,we neglect the interesting life among the real world with the Web popularity.As a result,a rational treatment to the Internet is of great improtance.To take the advantage of the Web,we are not supposed to immerse into it,but take it as a tool to travel around the world.Taking care of the relationship in your life,you will find that the world is amazing.