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2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:04浏览次数:5100
要求:
题目 网络的近与远(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning
2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your point of view

大体意思:

网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?


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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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Quietly and indifferently,an overwhelming number of people staked by a net are occupied with the Internet,which universalized in 20 century.They are neighbouring in geologically,yet far away from the heart.Thus,instead of talking to a live person in a real world,communicating in a virtual zone has become a fashion.The universalisation of the Internet does exert an effect to our life style. As the Internet has vitality,a looming danger-prevent fellow citizen from social intercourse-becomes more visible.On the one hand,it seems that people on the planet can be netted through the Internet,after all,what you need is that a computer and a click and then you are in with wide spread Internet access.Nevertheless,the more time you spend on-line,the less time you spend in real life,in which there are relationships with your parents,old friends,colleagues.Natually,it is preferable for us to watch Tv,log in MSN at home rather than to visit an old friend.On the other hand,interaction is a stimulating factor to develop a harmonious society.Without interaction,people become indifferent.A great attention is being paid to the head-scratching behavior such as campus violence,no courtesy in BRT,which obstruct social development.Last but not least. To sum it up,we neglect the interesting life among the real world with the Web popularity.As a result,a rational treatment to the Internet is of great importance.To take advantage of the Web,we are not supposed to immerse into it,but take it as a tool to travel around the world.Taking care of the relationship in your life,you will find that the world is amazing.

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