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2012年7月21日雅思大作文真题:The Fast Pace of Urban Development

发布时间:2013-07-23 15:57浏览次数:812
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【题目要求】In most cities and towns, the high volumes of road traffic become a problem. What are the causes of that and what actions can be taken to solve the problem?

【题目讲解】

解题思路:

第一段:提出‘车太多’的问题

第二段:问题的原因1农民工和小城市的年轻人涌向大城市就业导致人口剧增,城市扩大,出行距离增加;2 大城市交通设施落后,无法容纳剧增的车辆。3 国家政策鼓励人们买车,以刺激经济发展。

第三段:第一个措施,建立卫星城,疏散人口和城市资源。鼓励人们住在工作单位附近。

第四段:第二个措施,改善公交系统,鼓励人们乘坐。

第五段:第三个措施,抑制私家车的使用。

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More and more busy roads full of motor vehicles become a common upset setting in a lot of cities especially in the megacitis and that leads to a series of environmental and social problems around the world,for example,there is thick haze which has covered the whole China for several years to make some substantial adverse effects to our hearts and lungs. The most important point of the problem is the swift urban sprawl.As the world see the rapid incline in the population,cities as well as some small towns swallow the superb farmed lands and precious natural habitats as a hungry tiger encounters its poor and tender preys without and turn these lands into skyscrapers,villas and other buildings without the public utilities keeping the pace with the harmful development. The first solution is slowing down the speed of the urbanisation,because we should ensure that the urbanisation is coordinated with national economic advance and vice versa.Only that we can make sure that we have the time and finance to transform our "goat roads". On the other hand,I also think highly of the this opinion that we should transmute our traditional peasants into citizens and establish lots of modern countrysides around each city.That would help busy cities get rid of the traffic problems.

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