Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As show in the picture above,this picture about express education pays,in the left we can find unemployment rate in 2011 that pressional degree will earn much,and less than high school diploma is low income.this picture show how education is important for us. In your school,maybe you will find study is not so important fo you,but in this picture you can find hard study will be return.