学术词汇偏少,且文中有部分拼写错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。
Don't Trust Your Eye And Ear That Much ! Have you heard the old words "What you see is ture and that you heard is empty"? Does thing really like that ? I do not think so.We can not trust our eye and ear one handred percent. It is fulish to blieve what you see and watt you heard .The reasons as following. On one hand ,for example ,as a teacher,when you find one your get a very poor score in exam,you can not have that he is a folish student in mind and pulish him for not try his best to study hard.Maybe he got a stomach during the exam or something else.On another hand , no one is absolutely honest .So it is not that smart to decide something when you heard some words.You must have heard that the world going to be end in 2012.Was that happened.We all alive and the world moves on as usual.What's more,when a bad man kill someone ,he used to do a lot things to cover the truth and lead the pilice to a wrong way. So niot only police man but also every one of us should think once more before we make a decision,we can not count on our eys and ears that much!
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