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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

In our life, we always judge a person by their appearance, as I am. At the first i meet somebody, when i saw he looks pretty, i will meet him next time. But it is unwise, Good lenses, bad frames. we shouldn't judge person by appearance. Take me for example, one time when i have a big interview,it's important for me , i don't know why the man around everywhere. he looks ugly,so i didn't care about something which i should take attention. i thought he is crazy.after the interview i found that he said those thing are in the interview.after the interview i asked someone who is he. the minister, i can't believe it. because he looks ugly. after that i realized we shouldn't judge person by appearance. In the future i hope everyone will be noticed. no matter what he looks, he will have value in the world, and there has one way you can learn from he.

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