2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I will take she to Jiuzhaigou,because there are many interesting things to do,so much beatiful scenery to enjoy and a kinds of delicious food to eat.We will visit some beautiful sightseeing,such as four girl hill,colourful pond and trees sea.In the colourful pond,we can see the lake have five colour and it's very beatiful in the sunshine.In the trees sea,we can see many kinds of trees and they are very old,so we can touch the nuture closer.Many places will be visited.Then,we will do something interesting,for exmple,take boat,climbing,ect.Last we wil eat special delicious food,such as snakes,hot pot,spicy barbecue,ect. I'd believe,she will happy and this experince will be memorable for her.