2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays According to the one priture we are know about education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rate .through debeat ,we can looking less than hingh school diploma a big that unemploment rate .but ,the doctoral degree have less. the second priture is median weekly earning in 2011 ,